Sunday, January 2, 2011


Probably not. If you have doubts, you are certainly not ready.

It’s an impatient world out there—too many of us with too much to do. Too many newspapers to read, phone calls to make, e-mails to answer, meals to cook, minutes to spend exercising, dishes to wash.

And besides, you’re writing a book. (Or maybe something shorter.)

How much time did you give your writing? One edit? Two? Possibly three?

How many people have read it? And what did they say?

“This is interesting.” “I like it.” “You’ve done a good job.” “Nice article.” “An okay first chapter.” “Keep going.”

“Interesting” doesn’t cut it. Nor do any of the other comments. These people are your friends, and they don’t want to hurt your feelings. But their level of enthusiasm is tepid. And you know tepid when you see it.

Your piece is clearly not good enough. None of these people are raving. So all you’ve done is make a decent first start. A dent. But the thing is not publishable. Not even close.

If you go “out there” with this work, even spend money to get it published, nobody will make the effort to read more than a few pages. (Except, maybe, your three best friends and your mother.) You will have spent time and energy on a piece of writing that needs lots more work.

Now wait!! Don’t throw it away. Your idea is probably worth keeping. It’s worth re-working. It’s worth cutting, enriching, dissecting, made funnier. You are no dummy, you doubtless have unusual and interesting thoughts. Your work deserves to be read by others. Trust me on that one. Or rather, trust yourself. If you’re reading this, you are not a throw-away writer.

The stark reality that few of us fully grasp is—good writing takes a ton of work. More work than any newbie ever imagines. It takes more refinement, more re-working, more polishing than most of us dreamed would be necessary. It takes more tweaking than a Lamborghini.

But all that effort is a must. Unless you’re willing to edit obsessively, your piece will never be ready for the larger world. Which means most people won’t read it. So what’s the point?

Okay, then, you’ve gone over your work a dozen times. It’s finally begun to thrill you, to capture even your over-exposed attention. You honestly believe it reads like the best stuff you’ve seen elsewhere. So you give it back to your friends.

Geronimo! Their critiques have changed. “This is great!” “I love it!” “Powerful!” “I’ve given it to all my friends!” “Wonderful!” “Couldn’t stop reading!” “I stayed up all night!”

These are the critiques that should send you to a publisher. Immediately.


  1. When you're right, you're right. I'm not ready yet. But I'm working on it.

  2. jeanz2cool

    After lots of re-writing by Walter, and re-search by Norma Jeanne, Blue Glory, Book one in the 3-book series Seamount Series is all warm and snuggly in the Kindle, ready to be purchased for $2.99, and ready to be read and finished before book two appears. There is lots of learning, revising, editing, and comprehending before converting to HTML, getting the Book Cover in color and in black and white in the right size, number of pixels and proper resolution before pushing that feared button -- SAVE & SEND -- which wisks it off to and then to its new home on Kindle. It will soon go out to other E-readers, but Kindle is the front-runner at this time for many reasons. Among the most important is the technology that makes Kindle reading easier on the eyes, its longer battery life, and the number of books -- paid and free --that are available for Kindle. Being on Amazon, also makes Blue Glory available on all Apple devices, and most other E-book readers.
    All this was made possible because of M. Wills wonderful classes and teaching!!!!
    Jeanz2cool thanks Walter Golden for writing this book, and Maralys Wills our great teacher.